I love this story! It's unique in its own way as the protagonist is like the ones from Japanese novels(the status screens), but also like the ones in Chinese novels(where they reincarnate or transform into animals). The author's writing style is to the point and the only thing I'd request of them is to look over her spelling once in a while! š But besides that, the plot's at a nice pace and the different point of views are a plus to the whole story! Dear author, thank you for putting up your story online! I know it's kind of scary at first since you think you'll be judged or scorned by the readers, (well, at least I was) but you're doing a great job! And I'm saying this as a fellow BL author! Keep up the good work!
VCris
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LIKEThanks honey!! Yeah, actually I posted this story just as I try out, it wans't even my main one, but it ended up bigger than I expected hehe. And yeah, those spellings mystakes drive me crazy haha, this is actually the first book that I'm writting in english, so I appreciate any comments about the writing because some mistakes I know (the spelling) but others I may not. Thanks for your honest opinion!! (b~_^)b