Review Detail of 1stSlug in The Power of Ten: Sama Rantha

A fantastically in-depth DnD/RPG fiction about OP game mechanics and how to abuse the crap out of them as much as possible. So long as you know your DnD stuff, you'll fit right in. However, even for the layman reader, who understands about as much as "I R Stronk Player!" DnD jargon, you'll still be able to understand most of the story. The only complaints about the novel that I have are two things. Please kind in mind, that these are my personal issues and will probably have no effect on other readers. So don't be discouraged to read this novel. Cause again, it's a fantastic novel! MINOR SPOILERS BELOW: 1. In the initial stages of the story, the author jumps between future and past events each chapter. I found this to be a little jarring and felt it kills the immersion. 2. There are a lot of important characters. And while this is normally nice, I sometimes feel that due to this the MC of this story feels watered down, and it becomes a story less about Sama, but more about everyone around her. Which is a shame, because shes awesome.