Review Detail of Deametryvangowal in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Secret (EN)

I'm enjoying it so far but I do have to fix some mistakes via mind, in short there are grammatically incorrect sentences or changes somewhere in there, so be prepared. MC has fifth-grade syndrome or was it eighth? anyway MC took it upon himself to be THE hero, being a hero afraid of death but with absolutely no regard to his own safety. I mean he can be silly. Hero~ is a low-key **** planning a harem, two-faced (not using main head) . Hero~ placed himself in Slytherin for future planssssss but with the way things are he really belongs in Gryffindor or Gryffindoria pffft. knowing the future and being a transmigrator you would expect him to be more cautious. You don't find trouble, trouble finds you!