Review Detail of CopenhagenF5 in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Secret (EN)

Why I rated this like so? Writing quality is horrible, grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere. If I didn't read the book beforehand and the titles, I would be lost by chapter 2. Update quality is great but the ratio between quality and quantity is lacking. Story dev, char design, and world background are linked to writing quality. If we the readers don't understand what you're writing about, the rest of the story will not make sense.