Review Detail of Slesk in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Secret (EN)

From what I read, and that's up to chapter 2, English does not seem to be your main language. However despite that your grammar seems impeccable most of the time and the only tell is some of the sentencing structure or using words in the wrong tense, example is this, " but what hinders him is not to have any wands to be able to practice," the correct structure there should be, " but what hinders him is the lack of a wand to practice with,". However that can be forgiven as you still manage to get most of the paragraphs right. A bit awkward bit functional. All in all the story seems to be pretty good.