Review Detail of Alue in Tabletop Dungeon

Item: Tabletop Dungeon
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

AlueAuthor5yrAlue

Please give my story a try and give me your thoughts. I'd love to hear what you have to say about my story and I hope you enjoy! This is my first time writing, so any tips and constructive critisism is appreciated.

Tabletop Dungeon

Alue

Liked it!

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Morning_FragranceLv14Morning_Fragrance

Not enough chapters for me to give an opinion sadly. Real question is, will there be any advantages she'll get in the game? Like come on, her parents made the game.

5yr

AlueAuthorAlue

I honestly didn't plan on giving her a real advantage. Their work was basically character creation and coding the models in my mind.

Morning_Fragrance:Not enough chapters for me to give an opinion sadly. Real question is, will there be any advantages she'll get in the game? Like come on, her parents made the game.

5yr