Review Detail of LucyLynn in A Goblin's Evolution
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I see that many authors review their own stories, so I've decided to be shameless, too. And besides, this story has already proven to be good on other platforms :)
A Goblin's Evolution
LucyLynn
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Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
Jetstorm:Three a week would be satisfactory due to large size of chapter
LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
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LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
And again ..... I think the world doesn't want me to type out an actual reply for you along with suggestions
LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
Basically you're doing great and the work is awesome with nothing for me to complain about yet at least grammar wise. Now for some suggestions- 1. Hope you increase wisdom and intelligence and give her balanced stats before making her evolve into something that gives her luck bonuses. 2. Hope that even with increased intelligence and wisdom she still calls herself in third person with friends and family but first person with anyone else. 3. Give her some kind of skill with which she can tame or subjugate others. 4. Kill or subjugate the elves later on when she finally realizes that they are not friendly when she checks her relationship window.
LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
LucyLynn:Something like that, probably :) I was going to post every day for a while, at least until I didn't have any pre-written chapters left, but I suddenly caught sick, which is why there was a day between chapters. Kind of just forgot to upload them :P
She does get more intelligent and but when that happens, she'll stop referring to herself in third person. She could get some mind control spell later on, but I can't promise anything. Killing the elves might be difficult, though. You'll know what I mean soon.
Jetstorm:Basically you're doing great and the work is awesome with nothing for me to complain about yet at least grammar wise. Now for some suggestions- 1. Hope you increase wisdom and intelligence and give her balanced stats before making her evolve into something that gives her luck bonuses. 2. Hope that even with increased intelligence and wisdom she still calls herself in third person with friends and family but first person with anyone else. 3. Give her some kind of skill with which she can tame or subjugate others. 4. Kill or subjugate the elves later on when she finally realizes that they are not friendly when she checks her relationship window.
"A Goblin Who Can Write" doesn't work so well with publishing on amazon, so I changed to a real pen name. And the story wasn't put on hold because of the comic. The comic just happened, and didn't require much work on my part, I just had to pay for it :P And just in case you didn't know, there are new chapters up on RR. Book 1 had been finished. There are nine new chapters so far, plus an epilogue.
Freezingfire:Wasn't it by a 'goblin who can write'? Did you change your name ? And I followed this on RR since almost the beginning. I thought it was on hold because of the comic being commissioned.
LucyLynn:"A Goblin Who Can Write" doesn't work so well with publishing on amazon, so I changed to a real pen name. And the story wasn't put on hold because of the comic. The comic just happened, and didn't require much work on my part, I just had to pay for it :P And just in case you didn't know, there are new chapters up on RR. Book 1 had been finished. There are nine new chapters so far, plus an epilogue.
LucyLynn:"A Goblin Who Can Write" doesn't work so well with publishing on amazon, so I changed to a real pen name. And the story wasn't put on hold because of the comic. The comic just happened, and didn't require much work on my part, I just had to pay for it :P And just in case you didn't know, there are new chapters up on RR. Book 1 had been finished. There are nine new chapters so far, plus an epilogue.
