Review Detail of MiuNovels in His Genius Wife is a Superstar
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Just an honest review. Possitive: 1. The english and grammar is good, no compain about that. 2. Updates regularly, keep it up author. 3. Though a lot said that there is force and rape and all that, in my opinion, there isn't since both parties agreed. 4. Said that MC is easily swayed, in my opinion, she's just plain curios. Negative: 1. Romance is bland and cringy. I have read up to 100 and had to stop there. 2. It was like reading a porno than a romance (though I'm okay with it) but too much can spoil the story. I felt like, if they have s*** for real, I won't feel anything special about since they're always doing it, kinda feeling. 3. ML should be developed more and act like a real man. I get the feeling that he was developed according to the author's perpective. I think that's why everyone is saying he's not develop. I suggest that if you write the ML, take it as a true Male perspective. Observe males more if that helps. 4. The story is a bit dragging while the comedic scene seemed force. I suggest balance the mystery, the plot, the romance, the s***. In terms of humor, can't really suggest anything but to read and watch comedic movies more? But overall, don't let the negative comments drag you down! Fighting! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
His Genius Wife is a Superstar
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FlowerSeason:Can related. This kind of review is the one that people need to see👏
I agree with you on most points but I have to say, the ML is on point. He isn't the romantic hero CEO, but an average guy with sexual desires but romantic and respectful because he waits till she is ready. The ML is already real enough, with a bit more fantasy characteristics maybe, virgin till 30 something and he is a rich and handsome man. Impossible! If the author happens to read my comment, don't be discouraged! Don't take inspiration from some comedy movies, write as you like and you can edit the book after you complete it. That way, it's easier to figure out what's lacking.
I agree with you on most points but I have to say, the ML is on point. He isn't the romantic hero CEO, but an average guy with sexual desires but romantic and respectful because he waits till she is ready. The ML is already real enough, with a bit more fantasy characteristics maybe, virgin till 30 something and he is a rich and handsome man. Impossible! If the author happens to read my comment, don't be discouraged! Don't take inspiration from some comedy movies, write as you like and you can edit the book after you complete it. That way, it's easier to figure out what's lacking.
