Review Detail of Rauon in Rise of the Scorpion

A flat four since i know improvements will follow quickly and hopefully my comment for possible scenarios will help, character development pretty damn good and i like how you slowly gave them personalities that give color to the story and i am also glad about the effective cliffhangers keep us wanting more. Just keep up the good work as i am looking forward to how will you develop the skills especially puppeteer or puppetry being a fanfic and a new world what will happen if it slowly allows the user to control EVERYTHING around him in a certain range be it air, mana, chakra, spirits and the like? But if you do follow this route good luck as it will get harder fast so make it like close to the ending kind of gig. And thank you for a delicious read