Review Detail of evorp99 in THE WORLDS BEST

Sorry, but is this a novel? The writing is almost incomprehensible, punctuation all over the place, syntax almost absent, uppercase everywhere. You are not developing a story, you are only enlisting facts without a clear idea and inconsistency in the contents. Is there any character other than the protagonist? What are the characteristics of the protagonist? We only know that he is strong and want revenge. We are in a world we the life expectancy is 150 and there are other planes. Stop this is the entire world building. I don't expect much of world-building in a chapter, it should be a progressive thing, but, please, some contextualization is needed. Please, you have to re-read what you write, and before you write anything, a scheme on the idea that you want to put on paper is strongly needed. This is not only valid for the novel, but every time you write or talk in a formal environment you need to express an idea that is complete and understandable from anyone that read or is present.