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People's taste is bad when they praise this work, although some things are taken from another work, but you made it better than another work, such as removing Chinese phrases such as "I am your father", but on the other hand, you may be one of the worst people to write fight scenes so that I forgot how hard I worked. I sleep while reading and I forgot how many paragraphs I passed without even reading it, and the decisions that MC makes are very stupid, even though I read this. I still don't know whether MC is strong or weak because you exaggerate a lot in his skills and when fighting, I don't know who hit the other in the first place and the basis of the story is already as bad as a goddess I gave him Naruto and his body. I was hoping that he would rise to find himself in another world with Naruto and put it upon himself to reveal the secret of his existence in this world.

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Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World

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