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Review Detail of Vanbun in Little Miss Witch: Revenge of the Tainted Angel

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The story overall has a lot of potential with many scene that is very heartwarming and heartache that make you tear up for the characters but it was still lacking in a sense. The story need more elaboration at some part while other part seem unrealistic. Like now Mu Jianyu couldn't tell the twin apart even though he said he really love her and have been with her all these year. Or how Shen Zichen didn't realize he fell for the wrong twin this whole time. And the fact that xuiying who is best friend with Shen Zichen and her sister chuntao know if their feeling for one another but didn't try to pull them together? The character lack development and the story lack transition. i'm glad that it is complete but It could have been much better.

Little Miss Witch: Revenge of the Tainted Angel

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