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Review Detail of Dundet in Little Miss Witch: Revenge of the Tainted Angel

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Dundet
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I enjoyed the first novel and feelmthe same for this one in the beginning however as the story progresses the MC has got to my nerves and the strong FC that I was expected turned to be a jello with just a simple love declaration. The man ignored her and was absence for the critical month and then voila he showed up again acted as if all is good and finally just said I love you, I was wrong, punish me but marry me. As a reader I can't feel the sincerity. I know about love and forgiveness but it also something that you earned.

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Little Miss Witch: Revenge of the Tainted Angel

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anjeeriku
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I’ll take this as a constructive criticism in a wrong tone. My answer to this actually lies on ch176 which this reader refuse to read any further from ch174. I’m not expert on love but I know for myself that if you love someone, you would be will to work out on both of your difficulties that to drag the issue, blame each other, hurt each other when in fact two parties could find a same neutral page where both accept both of their failings and shortcomings. Could you really call it love if you wish to see your other half hurt and suffer just because he/she forsaken you in the past? Is it really love if you rather watch your other half waste both of yours time when you never know what might happen in the future? Do you really need to get even with the hurt he inflicted before the two actually try to work to save their relationship? I really wonder. I might not have enough experience in love so I’m curious of how people treat the person they claim to love.

chanduy
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well i think true love doesn't mean being blind and forget past. certain things can be forgiven but there should be a bottom line. there should be justice and no hipocrasy. i see most of the novels on webnovel have gender hipocrasy. men can be jerks and playboys while female leads should be clean pure and forgiving all the time. just because the ml slightly treats her better and apologize. but mls can sleep around, get possessive etc but if fl is possessive she is termed are petty. i hope your novels will be different , i did not understand much from the synopsis. if ml is the one who married and divorced female leads sister, then i should avoid this novel. i am looking for novels that give some respect for female leads.

anjeeriku:I’ll take this as a constructive criticism in a wrong tone. My answer to this actually lies on ch176 which this reader refuse to read any further from ch174. I’m not expert on love but I know for myself that if you love someone, you would be will to work out on both of your difficulties that to drag the issue, blame each other, hurt each other when in fact two parties could find a same neutral page where both accept both of their failings and shortcomings. Could you really call it love if you wish to see your other half hurt and suffer just because he/she forsaken you in the past? Is it really love if you rather watch your other half waste both of yours time when you never know what might happen in the future? Do you really need to get even with the hurt he inflicted before the two actually try to work to save their relationship? I really wonder. I might not have enough experience in love so I’m curious of how people treat the person they claim to love.
Newbie165
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Well author I don't really have a problem with your point of view, because anyways it's a free world. I will only add to what you have said by saying indeed love works the way you described it but if it was that simple hatred wouldn't exist. There's a saying that if you love someone you make it work no matter what,but there's also a saying that you don't hurt the people you love and also only those you love are capable of hurting you. There are a million of other stupid saying and I hate to admit it but each of them are right. ML hurt FL's alot no doubt and in the process of all the scheming the life of an innocent child is lost which kind of "Romeo and Juliet justification" is that what about FL's sister who died. For the sake of something called "Love" we forgive,forget and move on. I know this is fiction but who would accept this as their reality, since you have such a glib tongue and a quite "beautiful" sense of justice why don't you transmigrate into your novel and do us a favor by following your plot from A-T, maybe you can show us a perfect example of what forgiveness truly is.😇 I actually think it's well written though,I think this novel can reduce suicide rate by half. Reading this book is already suicide...

anjeeriku:I’ll take this as a constructive criticism in a wrong tone. My answer to this actually lies on ch176 which this reader refuse to read any further from ch174. I’m not expert on love but I know for myself that if you love someone, you would be will to work out on both of your difficulties that to drag the issue, blame each other, hurt each other when in fact two parties could find a same neutral page where both accept both of their failings and shortcomings. Could you really call it love if you wish to see your other half hurt and suffer just because he/she forsaken you in the past? Is it really love if you rather watch your other half waste both of yours time when you never know what might happen in the future? Do you really need to get even with the hurt he inflicted before the two actually try to work to save their relationship? I really wonder. I might not have enough experience in love so I’m curious of how people treat the person they claim to love.
anjeeriku
anjeerikuAuthoranjeeriku

You dont have to be so rude 😅 I never claimed to be one with a superior sense of justice, but I do believe people differ views when it comes to love and forgiveness. This book has been written and completed a long time ago and of course, my views and opinions changed overtime. Let’s just agree to disagree.

Newbie165:Well author I don't really have a problem with your point of view, because anyways it's a free world. I will only add to what you have said by saying indeed love works the way you described it but if it was that simple hatred wouldn't exist. There's a saying that if you love someone you make it work no matter what,but there's also a saying that you don't hurt the people you love and also only those you love are capable of hurting you. There are a million of other stupid saying and I hate to admit it but each of them are right. ML hurt FL's alot no doubt and in the process of all the scheming the life of an innocent child is lost which kind of "Romeo and Juliet justification" is that what about FL's sister who died. For the sake of something called "Love" we forgive,forget and move on. I know this is fiction but who would accept this as their reality, since you have such a glib tongue and a quite "beautiful" sense of justice why don't you transmigrate into your novel and do us a favor by following your plot from A-T, maybe you can show us a perfect example of what forgiveness truly is.😇 I actually think it's well written though,I think this novel can reduce suicide rate by half. Reading this book is already suicide...
Newbie165
Newbie165Lv4Newbie165

I guess we could agree to disagree on this one...but I was quite serious about the well written part though,I think your was really able to invoke different emotions in readers ... even though mostly (... slightly bad) Good job looking forward to more of your books I guess.👌🙂