It must certainly be exhausting to make a story and publish it every day so my advice is to leave it for a while. This story is very bad, there are some saving moments but they are very few compared to the ridiculous and embarrassing ones, the protagonist acts like a child, the system is the worst and the infection with the characters is nothing like canon.
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