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CamlEnvy
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It 's very boring to read this fanfic , honestly people are just enjoying it because they are bots or because it 's DxD , the MC is a doll being dictated by his system , the system itself is nothing much , the options do not make sense to exist since he does not have the power of choice, it will always be the obvious option, the rewards also do not value the mentioned proposals. It's frustrating how bad the author is writing after MC Haru's FanFic, fell absurdly after finishing MC Ichijou Yuuki's. Totally frustrated with these FanFic with mc with god complex. I'm only reading the fanfics because I hope the author writes something good someday.

Riser Phenex isn't a villain

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metanik_estrain
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well for me even the siscon i have to left in chapter 800-900 because he forgot some relationships like the world of koro sensei, have weird interactions sometimes and later the power system and how the mc develpo them was bad in my opinion. Its true that wasnt a bad novel but its not to read more that 1k chapters

Emomotimi_Salomi
Emomotimi_SalomiLv1Emomotimi_Salomi

please why an't you giving me my daily check in?I stay in this app for more than 3hours👿

Emomotimi_Salomi
Emomotimi_SalomiLv1Emomotimi_Salomi

an why there no adds available for people to get more points and unlock chapter ?

BoredDaemonGod
BoredDaemonGodLv4BoredDaemonGod

this author works always feel boring to me, his mc always happy go lucky type with a harem also the usual and mainstream cliches make reading it feels boring. I always drop at chapter 20-50.

Dan_2877
Dan_2877Lv14Dan_2877

rise of the tanuki clan is a good one i think

I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13I_Love_Hina

It's Dio after all... anyway any chance this could be AI?

Holy_Gull_1843
Holy_Gull_1843Lv1Holy_Gull_1843

I agree with you after the siscon chat group novel the works of this author fell a lot in quality

francisco_monsalve
francisco_monsalveLv1francisco_monsalve

Señora, si no le agrada vallase.

DaoistiEL4jr
DaoistiEL4jrLv1DaoistiEL4jr

Voy a decirles esto si no te gustan las historias que hace no las leas las personas que hacen las historias se esfuerzan en hacer la historia interesante y bueno

lRyuji
lRyujiLv3lRyuji

Está haciendo una reseña, en un lugar hecho para eso, si estuviera en cada párrafo haciendo una queja en lugar de dejar de leer, lo entendería, y todo lo que dijo es correcto, no fue exagerado ni nada por el estilo, y hubo tampoco hay comentarios insultantes.

DaoistiEL4jr:Voy a decirles esto si no te gustan las historias que hace no las leas las personas que hacen las historias se esfuerzan en hacer la historia interesante y bueno
DaoistlRderb
DaoistlRderbLv1DaoistlRderb

Brother, if you don't like it, don't read it, the jente who reads it is only to have fun not to look for a complex story, relax and if you want to read your cult works look for other works and no one will blame you anymore this is a work to pass the time it is not cerium please calm down

RadicalHuman02
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This type of garbage comments are the reason so much trash litters webnovel. You guys are always like "it's only for fun" and now we only get harem generic trash.

CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4CamlEnvy

👍

RadicalHuman02:This type of garbage comments are the reason so much trash litters webnovel. You guys are always like "it's only for fun" and now we only get harem generic trash.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

i have been an akikan fan for a........... surprisingly long time now that i think about it, i dont know how long exactly but it started from when he wrote his 'Starting as a mangaka' fanfic, back then i could tell by how good his jurassic fanfic was that this guy had potential and i was right........kinda. to be honest his development although repetative was steady and there werent any signs of decline and the like, well thats just my thoughts really. i dont know about you guys but i think his works started becoming just the same thing over and over again right after he finished his Sis-con fanfic, like he cant get out of a loop of some kind. there were indeed some instances where he started deviating from his usual route but it always stays the same at the end so yeah......... abit disappointed you know. i dont really have much to say other than those so bye i guess? (the weird fetishes were seriously annoying like i would have actually enjoyed it alot more without those especially the DISGUSTING NTR OLDER/OLD WOMEN FETISH THAT WAS JUST UGH!)

CamlEnvy:👍
AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5AlphaZwei

... How bad is your taste?

Dan_2877:rise of the tanuki clan is a good one i think
midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4midgetydeath

Normally, I would agree. But this is a review. The entire point is to read it and give judgement.

DaoistlRderb:Brother, if you don't like it, don't read it, the jente who reads it is only to have fun not to look for a complex story, relax and if you want to read your cult works look for other works and no one will blame you anymore this is a work to pass the time it is not cerium please calm down
midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4midgetydeath

Harem is good if the girls have their plots for the MC to be involved with and the writer doesn’t forget their plot threads. I think harem’s main weakness is that most writers struggle with pacing and pacing the introduction of new characters and their relationship and personal stories can get very hard very quickly.

RadicalHuman02:This type of garbage comments are the reason so much trash litters webnovel. You guys are always like "it's only for fun" and now we only get harem generic trash.
RadicalHuman02
RadicalHuman02Lv4RadicalHuman02

it's why I specified "harem generic trash" almost nobody does well made harems. it's so rare

midgetydeath:Harem is good if the girls have their plots for the MC to be involved with and the writer doesn’t forget their plot threads. I think harem’s main weakness is that most writers struggle with pacing and pacing the introduction of new characters and their relationship and personal stories can get very hard very quickly.