MC is a thief(stealing ideas) and a hypocrite(lecturing others about hard work when he himself didn't even do any hard work). Grammar kinda sucks. Heroines are one dimensional.
akikan40
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LIKEHey...uhh...I just want to clarify some things...me saying these bad things doesn't mean that the novel is bad. In fact, I kinda like this fanfiction since I'm a harem fan. This novel has potential, so please don't let my comment bother you(but please try to improve your grammar) and continue writing