Review Detail of Saadido in Sovereign System In Anime Worlds

I'll preface this review by acknowledging that the author has stated that he is only writing this for fun so he shouldn't mind criticism that much as no emotions went into making this "novel." A ****** power fap for a ****** mind. (aka a waste of time) It has nothing to do with storytelling, humanity nor proper grammar. My suggestion for the author would be to READ for fun before you WRITE for fun. You cannot run before you crawl at-least learn to walk first. The author seems like a cool laid back dude and I have nothing against him, but damn does his story suck objectively. Writing quality is superior to the sh*tiest sh*t, but still it's nothing worth my time. 2* Stability of updates seem good and I'm too lazy to give a f*ck so.. 5* Story development moves along so fast that you almost can't smell the b*llsh*t. Its still Sh*t tho, without any meaningful events nor emotional moments happening. 1* Character design is non existent except for the only described character the MC who looks cool and does stuff. 1* Side note: Why the **** did you write this author man, you're making me feel bad. I just have to say this, "Please tell me that you know that actual humans never act like they do in your story, cause then I'd feel bad for bullying an actual 7 year old. I mean seriously the MC comes home looking like a totally new person and he doesn't even know his mothers own name yet they suddenly have a family mumbo jumbo connection, defuq." World background is non existent this is a story you have to have watched Naruto to understand any of it. 1* I'ma get so much flack for this, but I really don't want the author to go on never receiving any criticism and never improving. He actually has a couple of decent ideas and an admirable will to type them down which I honestly envy. Author m8 just don't show the novel to someone you care for before you improve it. A crippling trauma better to be avoided.