Writing had some mistakes, world background perfect, story had a little bit of plot hole, and mc fruit way 2 op but luckily author nerfed and stufd so book didnt becme trash. LASTLY WAY TOO MUCH WORDS IN A CHAPTER, its only 4 but in normal novels itd be 12-16. Also book is dropped. I liked the book though, if u start it again reply so I can read and update review.
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