Review Detail of WN_grdy_mthr_fker in A Different Kind Of Journey
Review detail
my low review is because of the following 1.first it starts with a confusing, vague, fight seen 2.no intro for the characters 3.there is nothing written make an clear image of the background or the situation. 4.only internal dialogue and interaction between the characters takes lot of effort to form a clear picture. 5. when too many dialogue with no clear image in my head.. i tend to skip the paragraph and if you miss one or two things things get even more confusing. 6.i dont know how to fix if things are written in this way because i am no writer but i think in the start info dump even tough is very bad but i think it was necessary here. 7.my heart pains due to good english and good length of the chapters and a good plot but the above reasons ruined it for me ... best of luck
A Different Kind Of Journey
Dom2040
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hey hey hey ...i did liked it and you have volume of chapters i can't even write 5 chapters and believe me i have tried ... when ever you try your next work or just decide to write another version of this fan fiction ... you will do great ... personally i request a one piece fanfiction as you know you just cant have enough of them
haha i mean i tried 3 times but i was not able to move past 5 to 6 chapters .... i they say first impression is the last impression... so a strong and interesting start is a necessary... there are very few novels that started badly but managed to survive and liked by many .. same with anime for example if you have watched hitman reborn you will get my point 😂😂😂😂😂 i mean that anime was literally sht for first 15 to 20 episode and because of the hype that came after that made everyone stick it out in that first 15 episodes...
Dom2040:I hope in some way you enjoyed the story as a whole. I'm just a rookie writer and I apologized for the mistakes and flaws in the story.
Oh I see, HitMan reborn did have a good storyline and would go on to be a great series. It's really tough when ideas won't work with the story, I did have previous versions of this story to which I ended up scrapping before I proceeded to this one. Originally, this story has been on fanfiction and now has 73 chapters and 4 Arcs so far.
WN_grdy_mthr_fker:haha i mean i tried 3 times but i was not able to move past 5 to 6 chapters .... i they say first impression is the last impression... so a strong and interesting start is a necessary... there are very few novels that started badly but managed to survive and liked by many .. same with anime for example if you have watched hitman reborn you will get my point 😂😂😂😂😂 i mean that anime was literally sht for first 15 to 20 episode and because of the hype that came after that made everyone stick it out in that first 15 episodes...
Oh I see, HitMan reborn did have a good storyline and would go on to be a great series. It's really tough when ideas won't work with the story, I did have previous versions of this story to which I ended up scrapping before I proceeded to this one. Originally, this story has been on fanfiction and Watpadd, and now has 73 chapters and 4 Arcs so far.
Dom2040:Oh I see, HitMan reborn did have a good storyline and would go on to be a great series. It's really tough when ideas won't work with the story, I did have previous versions of this story to which I ended up scrapping before I proceeded to this one. Originally, this story has been on fanfiction and now has 73 chapters and 4 Arcs so far.
Oh I see, I think its the combination of the passion and energy on writing the story along with the ideas that comes in the mind. In my case, I was motivated to write this kind of story because all the fanfics Ive read had that same formula of going back in time and revealing their identities fast.
WN_grdy_mthr_fker:hey hey hey ...i did liked it and you have volume of chapters i can't even write 5 chapters and believe me i have tried ... when ever you try your next work or just decide to write another version of this fan fiction ... you will do great ... personally i request a one piece fanfiction as you know you just cant have enough of them