Nice prologue. Hope for a "kill the doctor that cured cancer" mision from the system and not "kick the cat and take the kids lolipop"................ ......
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LIKEI had to google Megamente to understand what is that. I don't really think that there is a typical psychopath. I personally can't enjoy a "good villain"(it fells more like an edgy lord without a backstory). I think it is more interesting to read from the perspective of a person with emotional disorder then your every day "normal" person who is trying to do good through his evil missions. So my idea in a way is making him at least neutral to others if no benefit is involved for him and if needed aphatetic to others. The Merchand of Death from this site is a good example if the author adds his own spice to the personality.
Dragonwine:So your idea is making him some sort of a "good Villain" like Megamente from the movie? If thats i would like it more than just the typical psychopath reincarnator that has to murder the heros just for a crappy reward
Oh thats ok maybe you can give him someone to love or a partner, only to make him growth emotional while being an badass if you do him too apathic toward others is hard to immerse onself in the novel but it's good the sameđ
ROnin2k02:I had to google Megamente to understand what is that. I don't really think that there is a typical psychopath. I personally can't enjoy a "good villain"(it fells more like an edgy lord without a backstory). I think it is more interesting to read from the perspective of a person with emotional disorder then your every day "normal" person who is trying to do good through his evil missions. So my idea in a way is making him at least neutral to others if no benefit is involved for him and if needed aphatetic to others. The Merchand of Death from this site is a good example if the author adds his own spice to the personality.
No he is not going to kill hero to earn some random reward or points but just like ronnin said he will do things that other "good" MCs can't do in fear of public outrage or heavens will. Just likr title said he is God but with evil nature. Thanks for review
Dragonwine:So your idea is making him some sort of a "good Villain" like Megamente from the movie? If thats i would like it more than just the typical psychopath reincarnator that has to murder the heros just for a crappy reward