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Review Detail of EliteCreature in The Hitting Zone

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EliteCreature
EliteCreatureLv45yrEliteCreature

!Warning! This novel contains quiet protagonist who ISN'T shameless, is working to overcome true life adversity, and DOESN'T fall out of character whenever plot devices are needed. All characters obey their character designs, and act within the bounds of personality limits. The plot flows well, and doesn't get ahead of itself. The author is keeping up a constant stream of smaller chapters. This is easy on upkeep, and is a smart decision in case life gets busy or writer's block happens. The only reason that this doesn't get a perfect score for me is that there are moments (very few, but they are there) where intense or emotional points don't hit home as strongly as they could. This is nitpicky, but 'hey' I'm allowed to critique. This is a review. TL;DR: one of the best novels on this site, and it does it without containing all the gimmicks of the majority of novels here, like guilty pleasure harems/ruthless protagonist/protagonist achieving everything and being perfect/blah blah blah. TL;DR;DR - Read this novel.

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The Hitting Zone

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half_empty
half_emptyAuthorhalf_empty

Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄

SoulReaper_Lord
SoulReaper_LordLv2SoulReaper_Lord

That is so true

Ultrazone
UltrazoneLv10Ultrazone

Lol

OtherRealmInvader_
OtherRealmInvader_Lv4OtherRealmInvader_

What an elite review

Test_hlSkovngshz
Test_hlSkovngshzLv1Test_hlSkovngshz

زج

Ultrazone:Lol
Jack_Balu
Jack_BaluLv3Jack_Balu

I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

bichuni
bichuniLv1bichuni

does this have romance or harem? i looked through the reviews and i think it looks good, hopefully there's none 🙏

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4KING_IN_YELLOW

hey any romance?

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄
WindMaster
WindMasterLv6WindMaster

is this novel dropped or a planned hiatus?

Muspon
MusponLv13Muspon

the author has health problems not sure exactly what but she dissapears for days and weeks at a time before coming back

WindMaster:is this novel dropped or a planned hiatus?
Kaizou_Koi
Kaizou_KoiLv4Kaizou_Koi

Author is there any romance in this novel?

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄