Review Detail of Democratis in Marvel Invincible Talisman

Ok, so apparently it gets better later on in the novel, but the amount of tainted chromosomes leaking out of the MC at the beginning is too much, like first of all, he is saying "oh, I gotta be sneaky and quiet to protect my identity", then he makes a big commotion right at his home and beats the $hit out of one of his neighbors (who is much bigger and stronger then him) with pure force right in front of his other neighbors who came to watch the fight. Not sure how else that scene was supposed to be quiet, he just flagged to the world where he lives. Then he goes out and spends a large portion of his savings on new clothes to better hide his identity, before he goes out and just kills someone flat out, then he wimps out after that, and conpletely expises his identity, abilities, and even where he fuking lives to the first person he saved, because he is horny and she is hot. Supposedly it gets better, but to get to the "good part" you are going to have to dive deep through the garbage dump this novel calls a beginning to get there. The chapters have been edited which makes it readible (tho the humor is so forced its ridiculous, and there are still quite a few jokes and other comments that dont really make sense), and the updates come out often. The ideas behind this story are good, and with the world-building from the marvel universe, this novel HAD a lot of potential. The trashy beginning has ruined it. A good representation of this novel is that game no mans sky. Worst beginning possible, but then slowly gets better (still quite bad, but not horrible). Author bro, if you fixed the intro/beginning, you would have a golden story on your hands.