The story is pretty great, the characters are good, not seeing much of typos and the canon of the story is slow, but steady, I like it. BUT, the chapters were too short for a weekly release, perhaps make it a bit more longer? Maybe around 4k words per chapter? That would be great! Since I just began reading this, I have just reviewed on what I have observed, not seeing much of a thrill or maybe a fight scene. Overall I love it!! Here is 4 stars for you! Keep up the good work fellow writer!
Amnesia
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