Review Detail of Suken in The City of Wonders

Hello everyone and thank you for taking the time to read my novel. I gave myself 5* because every author is doing it. I think I do not deserve it jet because this is the first time writing a novel, so it might be a bit rough. I had this idea for a novel in my head for a long time and i just wanted to get it out there. Unfortunately, I don't have any money so I can't pay anyone to write it for me so expect some grammatical errors. English is not my native language. I will try my best to get better. I hope you will like the story. It's a detective story in a modern fantasy world. Expect cool and thrilling cases in which the victims and perpetrators are form the fantasy world. And our brilliant main character with a mysterious and tragic past will face great challenges on his quest to bring bad guys to justice. Also he has a goal that has jet to be revealed. The release date will be faster and faster i will try t work as fast as i can to satisfy your needs. Chapters will be minimum of 2000. Every comment and advice is wellcome. For now thank you and wellcome to Wonder City.