I must say that eversince this novel has been featured in the main page (today), it instantly gained a lot of recognition.. and got a lot of comments, votes and reviews.. and I’m grateful for it.. It’s just unfortunate that I find it hard to adjust the novel in accordance with some of the comments and suggestions as the chapters have already been built a bit far so much so that a little change could impair some portion of the plot.. But to the rest of the recommendations, I’ll be sure to find a way to include them in the future chapters—especially those that I failed to foresee as I write the chapters daily.. so rest assured that many of your questions will be answered in the future.. So keep on reading.. Thanks a lot for all the comments, votes and reviews.. they will definitely be helpful to improve the story.. Qairi
Qairi
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LIKEDon’t worry about what people want you to change in the early parts, only worry about that if you decide to do a major rewrite where you plan on making the stories quality evened out after you finish, just make little notes of suggestions for your review after you finish and implement the ones you approve and can make work!!! Also be careful not to write yourself in a hole, half my books I wrote was ruined by that...