The story is GOOD. However, it is a little bit confusing. The grammar is fine. The transition of scenes is a bit confusing, though it is fine because it is the style of the writer. Keep on working hard, author! 🙌
DarkSoul23
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LIKEAuthor, it's just a reaction. If you will reveal it after many chapters, it will be FINE because that's your style. Don't mind my reactions too much. FIGHTING, AUTHOR!!! 💪💪 😊😊
DarkSoul23:Thank you yup there is scene of past and presents you have to find out everything.. I will do my best