Review Detail of Ultimate_Truth in The White Haired Loli [Dropped]

Haha ty for review. I am pretty new to this so I'll be making stuff that don't make sense. I just aim for some comedy and laughter

I also haven't received help at all excluding grammar and spelling. So I don't know to fix those xD

The problem i see is that your MC can stand against powerful enemies, including many people with weapons, then at other time is scared of a single sword. To deal with it there are ways but is not so easy and i don't know if that would go in line with what you want to do with your novel, like double personality or possession that may explain your MC incoherent behavior but is also not easy to carry on in a story. I think the idea of a comedy that is mostly for fun its not only OK is refreshing, i hope you find your way, i know its not easy, so keep it up and good luck and inspiration.