Review Detail of KendyReads in The White Haired Loli [Dropped]

The writing quality is pretty okay. I should say since you’re 14 and you mostly speak a different language. The stability of updates is just either 1 or more updates a day so I can read this instead of wait for 7 days for a update on translated novels. Your story development at least doesn’t cut around much even though you say you have no plot but that’s pretty okay since I find the story funny. Your character design doesn’t really have that much description but it gives most of us an idea of what they may look like so I’ll give a 4 for that. The world background I’ll just put that at a 4 because you don’t really have something to explain that so hopefully you make a prologue. Overall the total score is 4.2 stars so that’s not really bad for someone that just began to write novels.