Review Detail of Erotas in Beautiful Transmigrating Librarian: Supreme God’s System

Item: Beautiful Transmigrating Librarian: Supreme God’s System
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

ErotasLv55yrErotas

The story is very intriguing and fun to read! But the grammar ruins the experience a bit so I suggest getting an editor that could read over your work. I am excited for the MC's character development! Especially her IQ, it is a bit too low and quite frustrating in certain situations. Anyways, you have done a wonderful job crafting this story! <3

Beautiful Transmigrating Librarian: Supreme God’s System

godadi

Liked it!

Replies3

LizzylizardLv4Lizzylizard

The grammar really does ruin it and then there are comments saying that the grammar is good!

5yr

ErotasLv5Erotas

It is because the Author is improving! That is great progress and I hope it continues to develop to greater heights!

Lizzylizard:The grammar really does ruin it and then there are comments saying that the grammar is good!

5yr

LizzylizardLv4Lizzylizard

So if I finish the whole story that is currently up by the end there won’t be as many errors? Cause I really do want to read it but I become really distracted with the grammar mistakes.

5yr