Review Detail of SilentSurfing_ in Beautiful Transmigrating Librarian: Supreme God’s System
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Starting with the story, I like the quick concept of her Being strong. But I think mid-way it seemed forced with her character and how she easily adapts towards the occurent situation, plus shouldn't she have an inner turmoil of supposed surreal surroundings? (It's just thinking in a real perspective) and she had the type of persona to be empathetic; based on the first meeting with her doom with getting corned by that groups of people, crying helplessly because she can do "nothing" towards her situation. Yet suddenly going a 180 change of being strong and determined(?) doesn't somehow add up, I think the world's going fast in pace, with her faced with all impediment(included with meeting the "other" characters at once), making [some] readers couldn't keep up with it in confusion. Still—I like this types of story, so it isn't too bad, it does stand true to the genre it has. So props to that 👍 *overall rating; Writing; fairly good Stability of Updates; Neutral Story Development; Too fast paced, but fairly good if you can try and keep up with it Character Design; Not too bad World Background; Stays true to the genre
Beautiful Transmigrating Librarian: Supreme God’s System
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Thank you very much for the honest review. Actually, I want to explain in detail everything but it will slow down the story. Also based on my experience from my previous novel, my readers usually bored before the story even entered the main arc. So this time I will stick to my fast-paced story and maybe it will slow down after the MC entered the main arc.
I hope I wasn't too rash, in regards with my opinion, but I can see great potential for this book! And have high hopes for it as it goes to the top, I hope it does abit limit itself with the fast paced play of the story. As it kind of confuses some. (that included me haha); still do lessen yourself the trouble and not worry, I'm not an impatient reader, Since— I'm quite interested at how the story is flowing now. :)
godadi:Thank you very much for the honest review. Actually, I want to explain in detail everything but it will slow down the story. Also based on my experience from my previous novel, my readers usually bored before the story even entered the main arc. So this time I will stick to my fast-paced story and maybe it will slow down after the MC entered the main arc.
So true.. if the story would be drag down more and more and it would be long.. certainly some readers would be bored and eventually dropped it midway.. In my opinion, the pacing of how the story is just okay, maybe they just can't keep up..😁😁😁 Nice story though author-sama.. keep up the good work and hoping for more surprises to come...
godadi:Thank you very much for the honest review. Actually, I want to explain in detail everything but it will slow down the story. Also based on my experience from my previous novel, my readers usually bored before the story even entered the main arc. So this time I will stick to my fast-paced story and maybe it will slow down after the MC entered the main arc.
So true.. if the story would be drag down more and more and it would be long.. certainly some readers would be bored and eventually dropped it midway.. In my opinion, the pacing of how the story is just okay, maybe they just can't keep up..😁😁😁 Nice story though author-sama.. keep up the good work and hoping for more surprises to come...
godadi:Thank you very much for the honest review. Actually, I want to explain in detail everything but it will slow down the story. Also based on my experience from my previous novel, my readers usually bored before the story even entered the main arc. So this time I will stick to my fast-paced story and maybe it will slow down after the MC entered the main arc.