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xenetu
xenetuLv135yrxenetu

One of the few novels i have reviewed As always i will update it later when the story progress Writing quality: 3.5 stars the story can be read and understoud but there is some mistakes that are repeatedly occuring like the use of "inferriorated" instead of "infuriated" and some letters missing or changed among some words. Maybe the author will redeem them or ask a Proofreader to arrange it but will wait for it Stability of updates: 3 stars. Wasn't sure here since i begun to read only when almost 40 chapters where written. Will update it later Story development: 4 stars. It is a reasonably paced story, not too fast nor too slow with, im my opinion, believable bond among the characters if you take account of the world Character design: 3.2 star. There isn't enough background on the MC, you don't know anything on his past in the beginning, in ANY OF THE WORLD , I would've expected a bit more of a background on his past. Moreover I feel like Shao Tan is a bit forced in his bond with the other in the beginning but the tournament part seems to adjust him World background: 3.8 stars since it is the beginning of the story there isn't a lot of background but the bit about athe conspiracy in MC originale world was quite a surprise ( even if it can be expected) So an original novel with a good concept tha will probably turn in quite a piece of art if the author progress and doesn't fu°k it up

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Thank you for the review. First, this is my first ever created novel after reading hundreds of other novels. Second, English is my 3rd language so I am really sorry. Lastly, I too hope I don't fu*k it up. Wahahaha All in all thank you.

xenetu
xenetuLv13xenetu

No worry buddy just take your time and make some art. As long as you try there will be progress and hopefully some sponsorship by webnovel

TattooedGod:Thank you for the review. First, this is my first ever created novel after reading hundreds of other novels. Second, English is my 3rd language so I am really sorry. Lastly, I too hope I don't fu*k it up. Wahahaha All in all thank you.