Review Detail of HeartFlame in Rise of The Beast King

The idea was good enough but execution not so much Things just happen without reason at all and come out of nowhere too many skips between storylines it feels like "We are doing this now, oops that's a lie, now we are doing that" it feels really weird to read, a lot of unfinished business. The grammar also doesn't help at all The character interactions are weird Overall it feels that things keep changing on a whim rather than planned