Review Detail of Novis in Re:Death - Reincarnated Dead into Another World

I like the feel of it, it can become some nice story but one ****** clique can ruin this, since it seems you have taken heavy inspiration from japanese novels beware of being your avarage weeb s h i t. (myclasshasbeentransportedigotnothingimopananyway) The first chapter leaves good impression but for the love of god please simplify your status. I know you are trying to make a good game as well as a good story but enough is enough have a good time writing. [Its your novel thanks for reading this.]