Review Detail of MochiKng97 in Return of Uchiha Head in ATG
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Good attempt but honestly it's cancer. Ruined madara's character, his potential, along with his experience. He would do anything to get power. Haiz it's really disappointing and the grammar was so so so bad. The novel's structure was another problem. Idk what else to say. Just improve and rewrite is the only solution I can think of.
Return of Uchiha Head in ATG
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yeah, I know that I write awful bad hehe, and I change the character of Madara because he died with only regrets, he was not a bad guy even when he causes all that suffer, the man support to see the assassin of his brother in the same village for years! even when he loves so much Izuna the last blood relative that he can have, remember that the Uchiha blood is the people that most can love. and he does all the bad he does because he thinks all that he do was to finish the years of war over the world in the Tsukuyomi Infinite, he wanted to erase the Chakra in the world, haha was a ***** guy, thinking that the people will not fight without chakra,the badass part of him was because he loved so much to fight.