Review Detail of Burnt_Cereal in Ruthless-Losing my innocence to world (Hiatus)

Overall nce story. I really hope to know the secrete about Angelize origin. English and grammar could use a bit improvement. {+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}{+_+}