Review Detail of SomethingElse1 in I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

Very average, the things bringing it down the most is the awkward dialogue and the poor grammar. It seems like when the authors putting their thoughts into words they sometimes miss words and it's a pretty frequent thing per chapter. It's obvious no proofreading is done, maybe later on but early chapters have way too many noticeable mistakes. A lot of sentences are too longer as they are just constantly extended with multiple commas. Character design, average. Not much to think about as they're using characters from anime but it seems like a lot of the characters are a bit 2D. Main character is a pretty boring individual with supposedly high morals, not really though as he randomly has s*x with a girl he met while reading a p*rn magazine. World building is strange, it uses the dorm from Sakurasou and I guess what the author thinks Tokyo is like based on anime. I can't speak from experience as I've never been to Tokyo so I can't judge that.