Review Detail of Democratis in Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin

Ok, first of all the good points, the actual writing quality (like general grammar) is excellent. There are very few mistakes, and generally they are corrected immediately or very soon after they are pointed out. The update rate is very good and quite frequent. The world background is HP so of course it is a good world background. Now, the bad points. The story development was going very well with an interesting MC (cautious, logical, not a robot or a asshole, but he wasn't stupid, there is a harem which turned some people away, but what really killed it for me was adding in another transmigrator, especially when their circumstances were so different. I get the story needed some good antagonist's, but adding in more transmigrators when that was not clear from the beginning is a horrible idea, and I strongly advise the author (if he does look at this review) to change that as it really put off a lot of readers including myself. If you are just looking for a fanfic that isn't too serious I would say this is for you, but if you want some reasonable logic/story lines then I suggest you avoid this book or at least wait until more is made clear.