Review Detail of Rumour in Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
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This is not for Harry Potter fans. It's nominally set in the Wizarding World, but turns Draco into the hero. That was the original concept, and it seemed to have been well executed when the author stuck to rewriting scenes from the books. However recent chapters show a tendency to blabber without going anywhere, and the quality of writing has dropped drastically.
Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
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Yup. Story's quality decreased a lot when author decided to stop focusing on the books' plots and tried getting too original. Unfortunately his idea of originality just WASN'T, and seemed more like desperate attempts at making bulls**t enemies to go againts MC. Not to mention MC's complete personality change, from cautious and rational to dumb and reckless. Story's thoroughly ruined, unless he rewrites everything after the end of the first hogwarts year. I could even somewhat accept some stuff he did, if it wasn't for that OC antagonist he created....
Syneb:Yup. Story's quality decreased a lot when author decided to stop focusing on the books' plots and tried getting too original. Unfortunately his idea of originality just WASN'T, and seemed more like desperate attempts at making bulls**t enemies to go againts MC. Not to mention MC's complete personality change, from cautious and rational to dumb and reckless. Story's thoroughly ruined, unless he rewrites everything after the end of the first hogwarts year. I could even somewhat accept some stuff he did, if it wasn't for that OC antagonist he created....