Review Detail of Wakanda42 in Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin

I’ve always avoided HP fanfics because I didn’t really believe in the potential in them but wow this is amazing. The quality of fanfics are pretty bad (especially HP ones) and because of this it makes a gem like this one shine like a star. First- you made a cohesive story that is super reliant on readers having heavy knowledge of the plot and timeskips(so far). Second- your story is like another layer added to the original series making it your own story instead of just rewriting the original plot with a twist. Third- your grammar isn’t cancer and to my disappointment cancerous grammar is so rampant that I’m commending you for not having it. Fourth- although you made the MCs sidekick seem like he’s 16-17 (you made all the students seem like they’re 13-14 and since you’re tryna make him sound like a mature genius it’s to be expected.) the story still seems like it’s about kids and their immaturity is still evident (although Rons a dick) Fifth- the character are pretty close to the OG character we all know and love so gotta give you props for that. Anyway although tbh if I was an actual critic I wouldn’t give this a 5 star but, it was a very enjoyable read and you’re supposed to turn your brain off when reading fanfics and not over analyze every little detail. Plus in a genre full of mediocrity a gem like this get more recognition(probably would if it wasn’t a HP fanfic). Last thing those morons who are asking why the MC is cultivating just ignore them they’re idiots