Review Detail of AcexChaosx in Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
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This is an interesting turn of events with the Harry Potterverse. I have enjoyed the story so far, but I would highly suggest getting someone to edit your chapters before posting. Heck, if you had pre-written chapters I would be glad to edit some of the chapters for you myself. As I said, the story is interesting and I like how in tune you have been with the legitimate story of Harry Potter, sometimes even down to what characters say. My biggest struggle reading it is the terrible grammar (Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still an Literary work. The lack of grammar really takes me out of the world your story creates). Like I said, I've been looking to get into editing regardless so I would be happy to dive into it for this story and fix the chapters. Thanks for the chapters! I look forward to seeing future posts.
Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
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There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.
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(Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still "AN LITERARY" work. --you may have missed this, but before volunteering to edit grammar, you should first try to double check yours...(not trying to insult or whatever 'cuz we need volunteers here for the sake of good grammar hehehehe hope you don't mind)
AcexChaosx:xChaos Seedx#8428
AcexChaosx:There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.
AcexChaosx:There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.
I_am_low_profile:(Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still "AN LITERARY" work. --you may have missed this, but before volunteering to edit grammar, you should first try to double check yours...(not trying to insult or whatever 'cuz we need volunteers here for the sake of good grammar hehehehe hope you don't mind)
lol~ no unfortunately.... i don't read harry potter fanfic, i just accidentally stumbled here~ hahahahaha
Ancient_:Do you know any other Harry Potter fanfic with an evil or ruthless MC?
