Review Detail of Honest_critic1980 in The Destined World

Item: The Destined World
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

Honest_critic1980Lv125mthHonest_critic1980

It's ok story so far. the first few chapters could of been writing better. too short for my liking .not long enough to set the mood of story. privilege mc out for revenge ?? I give this story another chance and give another review when I in the mood to read more of the chapters.

The Destined World

darklord445

Liked it!

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Honest_critic1980Lv12Honest_critic1980

I forgot to mention I did like how well the description of background was done and also of other characters

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darklord445Authordarklord445

Thanks for the feedback! Don't worry I'll keep this in mind and will write big chapters too

Honest_critic1980:I forgot to mention I did like how well the description of background was done and also of other characters

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