Sorry, I couldn’t get past the first sentence. The content itself isn’t bad, but the grammar is so abominable and just too lacking for me to ignore. Call me a grammar nazi all you want but the amount of errors in just one sentence makes me want to cough blood.
Xiao_yue
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LIKEXiao_yue:Thank you for the review! If you're into unique transmigrators, try 'Power Up, Artist Yang'. In my opinion, it has good grammar and sentence structure. I've been reading it for reference. ^^
I enjoyed her story though there are some incorrect grammar on the story it is good and still understandable.. How to power up the artist?? If it's gifting I'll always gift her.. Thank you for giving us such a great story and for the translation..
starwish:I really enjoyed your story ^^ If you don't mind, I can help you proofread and edit your works.