Review Detail of sangsoolee in Rising Star

Wassup, author here. Don’t mind my rating cause I’m kinda biased towards my own work. Just rate the novel in your own opinion. Please give me some feedback cause this is my first novel and I would love to know how I could improve. Release rate wise, it should be a steady rate. At least one a day, but expect some gaps cause I’m still a student. ( you know exams and stuff) But please give this novel a read. The beginning might be slow but it will get better, trust me. I have already got a rough idea of the direction of the story but it still needs a few tweaks. Please write a review as it will help me provide better content. Thanks!