The storyline is good but the Author needs to fix their grammer. The scenery and the characters are very good. Would like to read what happens. Not sure who the main male character is but there were a lot of characters introduced and their roles. I like the main female charactor and would like to see how she is developed along with the other characters in this story.
guang_bao
Liked it!
LIKENo replies. Be the first!