I've read till 60 plus Writting 2/5 I've got dizzy not because of grammar but becuase the FL dialogue is too loud. Update 4/5 It starts with 90 plus chapters Story development 1/5 It's just starting from the 3k + so i expect the development is slow. Though from the 1 to 60+ chapters nothing really happened except the FL acting spoiled and flirty without even noticing it while the ML changes gf and showed how he controlled all of china and he is just what? 16 Character 1/5 FL annoying. Spoiled. Loud. Doesn't know she is already flirting while saying that she only wanted to be friends with handsome guys. I don't know why it should be a guy, shouldnt she be making friends with girls. Always looking for a handsome guy who has a gf while she already has a fiance ML *******. Changes gf every week while he has a fiancee. Flirts with gf infront of fiance. The emperor of china since everyone is bowing to him. World 1/5 Not mentioned. This should be a 0 but there's no zero. This is probably a harsh review but this is just my openion. Everyone is free to read it and be the judge. As for me, I'll remove this from my library.
Mo Xiaoshui
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LIKEMochi233333:👏👏👏👏👏 This is what a good review is like clear and concise. Thank you for that🤗. At least now that I have been warned before reading the story I'll be prepared 😂😉😉😊
Se olvidan un detalle. Están comprometidos por decisión de la familias y no de ellos mismo. Porque debería importar que tenga prometido. El ML tampoco es santo. Además es normal no ser fiel a alguien que tú no aceptas. No lo elegiste vos. El deber y el querer amar siempre van a estar en conflictos. Segundo, es su forma de ser... Siempre parecen querer a alguien obediente y reservada aunque la mayoría usan esa fachada porque es lo que su sociedad pide ignorando de que fingen y tapan su personalidad, lo cuál no es sano. Prácticamente mujeres iguales con interior diferentes sin importar si está podrido o no.