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The story itself is somewhat interesting but it is marred by inconsistencies. The MC claims that since he's so weak people above him would be able to kill him easily, then he kills someone several realms above him. He's also extremely rude to sect elders to the point where they really should have disciplined/killed him by now, but they magically don't. Money is another thing that doesn't make sense. It's 10 copper to enter a city but 1 gold can feed a family for years? It feels like the author is just making up facts about the world/etc whenever they want without regard to whether or not it lines up with what was previously written. Then there's the way the MC acts. He's mean cruel to those weaker than him for no reason, then in the next breath goes out of his way to help them. It should also be noted that the author is using the fact that he's reincarnated to make him an expert at everything, whether it makes sense or not. Why would he know a very powerful technique that can only be used by a woman? And of course he's also an expert on alchemy despite not doing it himself. The story does have potential, but the author isn't paying enough attention to their own writing to bring it out.

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