Regardless of the whole “LGBT in the Wrong Section” debacle, I think this story has some potential! Personally, I like the MOBA element of the story, I feel like it might be put to good use later. The grammar in some areas of chp. 12 & 13 is a little wonky, but over all the readability of the book is solid. Our main couple have met (sorta?) but haven’t really interacted yet, so we’ll have to see how that works out later on. But overall: worth a read and a spot in your library, imo :)
Mo Shang Wang
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