Great job, I love the interaction of the characters and the flow of the story. Having a small harem allows you to expand the characters and give them a piece of history without making Pokémon instead of girls, it's also nice to read that GG has friends in his peers who also have relationships, the world seems more alive with each chapter because of this. I could say that the lack of 18+ scenes is disappointing, but it doesn't really change the essence of the story. I wish the author good health and inspiration, I hope to see a sequel sooner or later.
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