Review Detail of lichennight286 in Harry Potter and the Ninja Library

well i believe this book can be great you already have the main idea of combining magic and ninjutsu.... he also has to make it what it was originally intended for when whats his face six sage guy passed his teachings down instead of killing and what not, now you just gotta figure out the if, when, and who he is going to share his knowledge with.. since that zetsu came obviously that thing is going to be helping someone or something so most probably he is going to need help and maybe a lot depends on u but.... a lot of people knowing may make it harder on you to keep up with all that info..... anyways you are the author and these are just some ideas that may help you narrow down how you want your own story to go and like i said this story has already started of pretty damn good so hope you continue writing it is one of the better fan-fics i've read so keep up the good work...