Review Detail of NiawKing22 in The Love That Remains

Very, very good! The style of writing makes me feel I'm reading a manhwa/ anime and seeing the scenes of her falling in love again! The flow of the story is well paced and very attractive for a first chapter. Would like to highlight some typos! Hope it helps and doesn't feel bad :( Paragraph 5: Q high school. But paragraph 15 it's H high school. Paragraph 10: "Umm...," the comma isn't needed when ending a word in triple periods. Paragraph 13: it may sound better if it says "cry *out* in pain"?